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Axis Powers Hetalia : Italy & Holy Roman Empire
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Hello! This is my third time I write a critic so...I'm going to critic the best I can.
This is beautiful~ It shows so much emotion and it gives the feels. It's beauty is hard to describe but it's sad and beautiful. The pain Italy feels must be a lot and this is very touching to the heart. It reminds me of my dog that died and I had to let go. Everyone who will see this wonderful piece of art will be touched and will feel like crying. Even though it's sad it's very beautiful. Keep drawing more beautiful art and I hope my review made sense because I usually don't make sense~ Ve~
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Critique by ImmaEatUrYaoi Apr 6, 2014, 12:25:40 PM
You know, I'm not even a big supporter of either HRExItaly or GerIta, but this picture is simply amazing. I must say, I felt my heart break a little, and I can't help but feel a bit sad.

Though, I'd recommend that you should have used some paler/more grey colours. You know, some sad colours, because it would have a greater impact to the one seeing the picture. The colours in the picture right now are absolutely delicious ^7^ I love them, I really do, but it kind of contradicts with the sadness in the picture. Also, the grass could have been a bit more detailed. Nothing is REALLY wrong with it. It's just very... simple. Again a contradiction, this time towards the details in the characters, who are greatly made (not mentioning Italy's arm, it's a bit long, and his feet are just a tiny bit small XD don't worry about that, though, they still look fine, both of them ^^) I would also had loved some more detailed clouds, but it might have taken the attention from the characters, so I'm not gonna step on that.

All in all, I liked the picture a whole lot. A good job, indeed. The colours could have been a bit more matching to the scene, but that's nearly the only thing that bothered me just a tiny bit. Beautifully done!
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Captain-Norrington Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist
This brings tears to my eyes ;u;
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:iconhumblehetaliagirl:
HumbleHetaliagirl Featured By Owner 2 days ago
H-holy roman empire.... Poor Italy....
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:icongilbertbielschmidt:
GilbertBielschmidt Featured By Owner 4 days ago  New member Hobbyist Artist
HRE......
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:icongilbertbielschmidt:
GilbertBielschmidt Featured By Owner 3 days ago  New member Hobbyist Artist
Ich liebe dich HRE
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Llama Emoji-66 (Orly) [V3] 
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:icondothedinosaur24:
DoTheDinosaur24 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
this is beautiful.
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. Emoji07 
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DoTheDinosaur24 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
omg you responded! no problem! (you're a really really great artist so I'm happy you responded)
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Meow :3 
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:iconthetrueitaly:
TheTrueItaly Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ghost me: Oh yeah, and this is amazing ^^
so beautiful....
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! Emoji06 
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:iconthetrueitaly:
TheTrueItaly Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
*dies of feels attack* Dipper Crying :( 
Look! You even made France and Romano cry! France (Crying) [V3] Romano (Cries) [V4] 
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Even France and Romano?.... wow! Doge? 
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Silentsuna Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
BEAUTIFUL!! *cries in corner*
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. Big Fool Emoji-06 (Blush) [V2] 
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:iconsilentsuna:
Silentsuna Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome ^^
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:iconnharmoniafangirl14:
nharmoniafangirl14 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  Student Photographer
:'( So sad and beautiful
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. kaomoji set 1 9/19 
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:iconnharmoniafangirl14:
nharmoniafangirl14 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Student Photographer
You're welcome
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:iconclevermessenger:
CleverMessenger Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
well!!! I hope you're satisfied with my heart in pieces!
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes I am. :iconmnrevilplz:
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:iconclevermessenger:
CleverMessenger Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconstubbornplz:
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:iconkarmasluck:
karmasluck Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Student General Artist
HNGH MEH FEELS
MY FEELS ARE CRYING
AND SO ARE THEIRS
AND YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS?
THIS H-Bomb Hiccup H-Bomb Hiccup H-Bomb Hiccup H-Bomb Hiccup H-Bomb Hiccup H-Bomb Hiccup H-Bomb Hiccup H-Bomb Hiccup H-Bomb Hiccup H-Bomb Hiccup H-Bomb Hiccup H-Bomb Hiccup 
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NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hehe :icondawhatplz:
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:iconkarmasluck:
karmasluck Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Student General Artist
*falls on floor from crying*
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:iconhetaliabug:
hetaliabug Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015
Boom that just just hit me this is amazing
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. Big Simfool Emoji-22 (Pervy) [V4] 
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:iconcapedfox:
CapedFox Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AUUUUUGHHH THE FEELS ARE COMING BACK!!!! THIS IS SO CUTE!!!! 
;_; Awesome job!!
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! Llama Emoji-03 (Sparkles) [V1] 
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Atlantica227 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014
dude, why??? damnit, now i think im gonna cry dude!!! this is just so pretty and sad and beautiful all at the same time!
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. Racing Girl Emoji (You meanie) [V2] 
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:iconkarmasluck:
karmasluck Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Student General Artist
OMG MY FEELS
;--------------------;
.                         .
.                         .
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm evil. Llama Emoji-01 (Laughing) [V1] 
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:iconkarmasluck:
karmasluck Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Student General Artist
:l
*grabs 2p Italy* :3
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
2P Itly? How did he get here? O.o
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:iconkarmasluck:
karmasluck Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Student General Artist
i dunno. I just randomly grabbed someone thinking he was romano....
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah... Romano (Curse) [V2] 
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:iconkarmasluck:
karmasluck Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Student General Artist
XD
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Tiger610 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:33< is this ship... like karnep? :iconconfusedplz:
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
like what? Meow :3 
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:icontiger610:
Tiger610 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:33< karnep
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't get it. :icondawhatplz:
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:icontiger610:
Tiger610 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:33< it is purrobably another ship :iconpervykarkatplz: Heart  :iconpervynepetaplz:
:33< do you now get me?
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohhh. :3 Tell me more about that another ship.
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:icontiger610:
Tiger610 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:33< s x d
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:icontiger610:
Tiger610 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:33< (sufferer x disciple)
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Banoonah Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
;-; y must u hurt me that way
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sorry Emoji24 
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skaiblue Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014  Student Filmographer
*starts major hypervenalation, and falls to the flor screaming out: ITALLLYYYYY*
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:iconnonexistentworld:
NonexistentWorld Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow! 
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