For the second time Italy crying in the end. You have talent, Germany!
I'm Canada !
Nice comic! I love it! They are very cute!
I like to be really precise when I'm writing, especially when it's to someone else. That's my way of showing that I mean what I am writing.
For the writing style, it's just that the first comic is all happy and cute and funny and nice at the begining then in the few last panels the mood is changing, in the second it keeps it up then there's a bloody (no England pun intended) flashback and then what he says to Italy...
But I guess that it's not just the writing but also the drawing, well mostly the drawings, after all it it so much easier to express emotions by showing it, it's much harder when writing it. That, and drawing are really pretty and give a good look on what is happening. You even changed the colours, the first one being in gray shades and the second in brown and red shades just making more contrast between the feelings and atmosphers of the two comics.
Super! Just one thing... How do you send someone a message? Do you use the note-things? Sorry, I'm new at that Deviantart account-thing and I don't know how it all works over here. At least I now have an icon! Made it myself based on my own dove! (not the right species ) And I know how to use icons! But it's nothing much anyway, just really fun.
Now, this comment counts for both comics.
It’s a really nice comic even if it is not finished. You start with something funny (Prussia!) then in the end the mood changes (aww! Italy…) I really like that style of writing.
And I really like how you've drawn the characters, it looks like Himaruya's but it has this something that makes it different.
And the way you drew Italy so cute! And how you drew those chibis of Italy and Holy Roman Empire in the second part, so adorable, I'm laughing just thinking about it! Good luck in doing part three, it really is annoying to delete part of what you work on, I know.
I already started, just need a few precisions of your part. Just say okay and I’ll message you about them.
(Wonder if those icons will work…) Wait, they do!